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__My name__= Mark Trainor

__Presentation__= Wednesday, January 13, 2010; B block

__My Mentor__= Kristen Ward

__Subject& sub topics__= steroids unacceptable damaging integrity baseball players

__Thesis Question__= Baseball players who take steroids have a better chance of performing to a baseball player who doesn't take steroids?

__Statement__= Players who take steroids are going to perform better to baseball players who don't take steroids

__Premise__= The use of steroids are unacceptable for the game of baseball

__Conclusion__= Baseball players who take steroids are damaging the integrity of the game of baseball

__Thesis sentence (argument included)__= Since the use of steroids is unacceptable for the game of baseball it can be concluded that baseball players who take steroids are damaging the integrity of the game of baseball

__Thesis Question (enhanced)__= Since the use of steroids is unacceptable for the game of baseball, how are baseball players who take steroids damaging the integrity the game of baseball?